This is good! For the most part, your proportions are spot on, and your foreshortening isn't too bad either! The only thing I can think of is to watch the feet. I haven't had a bunch of time to study a heavy-hitting leap, but I don't know if the toes wouldn't be more flexed forward. Does that make sense?
The only thing I can think of is to watch the feet. I haven't had a bunch of time to study a heavy-hitting leap, but I don't know if the toes wouldn't be more flexed forward. Does that make sense?